Tuesday, April 12, 2011

I am writing a story about a time I felt scared

My heart was pounding in my chest. I was scared stiff when I was going to Kelly Tarlton's. I went swimming in the tank. I don't know if I'm going to do it. I don't know if I can go in. I can't go. Mummy and Jason and Emily came to watch. I was in the tank! I saw a shark...AH

My heart was pounding in my chest. I was scared stiff that they were going to find me. Me and my friend were playing hide 'n' seek. When they found me, I screamed! When they found me I screamed and cried. I hate it when I scream. I had goosebumps. KR

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Wow great story that wouid have been scary