Wednesday, April 13, 2011

My story about been out with mum. I was really tired. I was looking at something and when I looked up, mum was gone.

I was terrified because I had never been alone before! I looked everywhere but I could not find her. I was really scared because I thought someone would steal me. Then I went outside but she wasn't there. I started to cry, then mum came from a different shop. CD

I was starting to feel scared and worried. I looked up and down the aisles but I couldn't find her. So I went to the counter at the front and she helped me. After the lady at the counter called mum, I heard mum calling for me. Then I found her and we hugged each other. JCn

I was angry then! I got hungry. I was looking for mum. I was running around. I looked in every room but she was not there. I ran all over, I looked everywhere. I was sad. Suddenly, I heard my mum. I ran to her as fast as I could. I came to her and I hugged her. DN

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Nice story guys like the dicriptive writting